Senin, 28 Februari 2011

Sacrificing and apologizing

 
 
this is narrative story about agreement, Sacrificing and apologizing,
1975, there was a family, in this family there was Mr. Smith and his son, Pablo. They live in Adelaide, Australia. Mr. Smith’s wife had been dead 7 years before.
One day, Mr. Smith promoted a son, his name was Alan. Alan was 8 years old same with Pablo. Mr. Smith’s family was poor family. Alan and Pablo didn’t study in school, because there was not fund for it.
When in the Australia there was inflation, Mr. Smith was being fired, he was stopped to work. And he must go abroad for looking for job.
1977,Mr. smith was going to abroad, the government give money for his  leaving.  He must do it to give food for his son. Before he went to America, Pablo said, “daddy, I hope, you will not forget your sons here!”, and Mr. Smith replay, “don’t be sad Pablo, no, I will not do it. What will you do when I am in America? ”
Pablo said, “I will be waiting you although you need long time to go home.”
And then Mr. Smith went to airport for going to America
Mr. smiths said to his neighbor to keep his sons.
3 months was left, but Mr. Smith never gave letter or money to their son.
None of neighbor gave Alan and Pablo a food or money, they must look for wood to get money. Usually they looked for it in forest.
But there's no news at all about his father. Pablo and Alan are very worried about their father.
One day he bought the chocolate on the roadside, she bought a chocolate and hand over his money on the old shopkeeper. Then he hurried to open the brown wrap it and hope with all my heart to get the prize. Apparently not as expected, there is no prize in the chocolate. A few weeks later, it was the birthday of  Pablo, Alan gave a birthday gift in the form of money from the savings. Then the money used to buy chocolate Pablo prizes. It turned out that Pablo did not get the prize in the chocolate. He was very disappointed in her fate. He was very sad.
One day, when the cold season, he found the money 5 Dollar at the curb, then he took the money to buy chocolate to get  prizes. But his fate is still ugly, he still did not get the prize for American tour. The seller saw his struggle,then he  gave a car of chocolate, and then he got  the gift.
He was very pleased, then he ran to home. But on the trip,he got hit by a car . his foot can not used to walk. Then he  asked Alan to represent him go to America and find her father. Alan promised to find his father  and pick up  him to go home.
Pablo willing to be left alone, and Alan went to America to use the vessel named Tetanic. the time of travel Tetanic sinking ship, and some lucky person  were brought to the nearest island, Bali, by a small boat. While in Bali, Alan met his father actually, his name is Goyus. They hugged each other and feel happy .But Alan recalled and remembered  that he had promised to find Mr. Smith, and he told his father about everything. His father was willing to help Alan to find his father and use all his property to look for Mr. smith as reciprocation.
1976, they both went to America, they patrolled the streets in America, shared the announcement, calling the police, but there was not a result. All funds of Goyus  used to look for Mr. smith.
 One day his father fell ill, he was too tired to find Mr. smith.
Then he was taken to the hospital, she must stay there for 1 month.
Alan was very sad, he wanted to keep his father but he remembered that he must find his stepfather. He was forced to leave a father while and look for Mr. Smith. Then he went to the garden city. He saw Mr. Smiths was walking and bringing a large suitcase. Alan ran with all his strength, then Alan called him from a distance, and finally he met his father. When in meeting, Mr. Smith pulled Alan into a black car and took him to a strange place, at the home of Mr. Smith. There, Mr. Smiths told that he is a secret agent, he was a member of FBI. He was not allowed to go home, hide his identity and must not be home until he kill a great villain who has escaped from prison. Then, Alan said, "who the criminals, I will help to catch and kill him?” Then Mr. Smith replied, "Gayous". Alan fell silent. He was shocked and did not know what he should do. Then Alan asked, "do you know where he is now?", Mr. Smith replied, "I got word that he is now in hospital in downtown of  los angels," Alan have to think who should he choose, Gayous or Mr. Smith, he finally chose Gayous. He immediately hit Mr. smith, a fight broke out which was great, they were issued a gun, Alan shot Mr. smith until he was dead. Suddenly a lot of police who approached him, they immediately approached him and catched . Mr. Smith has died in the incident. See greatness in the action, police order Alan to replace Mr. smith’s task to capture and kill off Gayous, before he was shot dead Gayos, he was not allowed to go home. He finally realized that Pablo waiting in home. he eventually regret. Alan wanted to commit suicide, but it will only complicate the situation. Then he got word that his father was dying. Then he had to take advantage of this situation. Then when her father was dying, he spoke, "kill me, your brother is alone, please", then with very forced, he  killed his own father while dying.
After that Alan sent home to his house and Pablo shocked by what he said. But Pablo was a good-hearted, firstly, they usually fight, but ultimately they can peacefully and promoted as a child by seller of  chocolate that gives them a car of chocolate.
And finally they lived happy,although they are not happy at all ... they are still grateful.

(by muhammad ali alghofiqi)

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